Jul
11
PART TWO: COMPONENTS OF A SALES PAGE
Note: As bloggers, we often branch out into other forms of advertising in order to monetize our VRE (virtual real estate). The Pajama Professional Sales Page Series was written by Sara Christensen in an attempt to help facilitate this often natural extension of blogging. After you finish the article, you can follow the links to parts one and three of the series.
In the last installment of the Pajama Professional Sales Page Series, I discussed the questions you should ask yourself before you begin writing your ad copy. In this part of the series, I will outline some of the rules I will follow as I create my ad:
Start by writing the offer. Many copywriters will tell you to start with the headline and I’m not going to tell you that’s the wrong way to go. From my background in journalism, however, I know that if I write my copy first I’ll be better able to write a fitting headline. In my copy, I will include the answers to some of the product questions I asked in the last installment of the Sales Copy Series.
First, however, it is important to always keep in mind that people buy based on emotion. They justify with logic later on, but you must compel your visitors to purchase by targeting certain triggers. Here are the five primary triggers on which you should focus as you craft your letter:
- Fear of Loss
- Hope for Prosperity
- Hope for Beauty
- Hope for Health
- Fear of Failure
The triggers are basic, but they are key to converting prospects into paying customers. you don’t need to use all of them in one sales page or address them directly. Just remember that you can list numbers all day long, but you won’t really start moving product until you make people feel. There are, of course, certain facts that cannot be overlooked in a sales letter; things like price, cost, etc. must be included.
One of the most important things to remember is: don’t save the best for last. If you start out listing minor features, you’re going to lose many sales. Start with the key deal-maker and work your way down. Your copy can be as long as you need it to be, but if you save your best feature for the grand finale, you can bet that very few people will sit through the entire show. Hook them with the headline and hold them there from the very start with your hottest points.
For instance, if I’m writing an ad for an iPod, I’m not going to say:
Choose from black or white!
Free ear buds included!
Pretty cases sold separately for easy customization!
Small enough to take on a jog!
Super-clear video screen makes it easy to create playlists and watch movies!
AND…
Put your entire CD collection in one place and carry it with you all the time!!!
Frankly, with that copy (I don’t suggest using the word “pretty” either - for any product) I’ve lost the visitor at ear buds. By the time they would have read “video screen,” my potential buyers have downloaded half a movie from a torrent site. If I flip the ad, people will stay tuned to see what’s next. In other words, don’t bury the lead.
After you’ve listed all the killer features, shared the price and let your customers know exactly why your product/service is worth what they are going to pay for it, you need to include three more elements to seal the deal: a time limit, testimonials and bonuses.


