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I’m going to show you how you can write with authority and inspire trust by providing you with information and techniques you can apply to your writing. People want reliable information they can trust. A trusting readership is a platform from which you may launch anything you like, including ethical monetization efforts which will succeed.

In the recent past, I helped a friend of mine change direction for his blog as he shifted from one type of work to another, related field. His problem was that his announcement was very meek-sounding and wishy-washy. It had no boldness to it, nor did it speak with authority. Because of this, my friend’s decision appeared arbitrary and he made himself seem as though he lacked the skill to excel in his new field. Nothing could have been more untrue, but he hurt himself with his writing.

All it took for him to really improve his game was for me to tell him what I’m telling you in this article. Now his writing is much more mature, solid, and bold. He speaks with authority, which inspires trust in his skills. You can do this, too. I’m going to tell you some of what I told him and more (more because this is general and the context is different). Here we go:

Know what you’re talking about in the first place

Does this really need to be said? Considering all the blogs out there about how to make money online by people who aren’t earning a dime online, I’d say yes. You must know what you’re talking about, or game over. Are you an expert in your subject?

Prove you have experience

Prove you have experience in your field by relating it to your audience. I just did that in this article’s second paragraph when I told you the story of my friend. I do it on my own blog in order to sell blog consulting services when I relate the successes of my clients. This technique cannot be applied to every post you write or your writing will be formulaic and repetitious. How are you proving to your audience that you have trustworthy experience?

Begin with a strong lead

Go back to the beginning of this article and read the first sentence again.

It is matter-of-fact and it tells you what you’re going to get from this article. It is a statement without flourish or slight-of-hand with the wording. In journalism, this is known as a strong lead. When you write sentences before your main point in order to set up your main point, in nearly all cases you are weakening your writing, which weakens your authority. Telling readers exactly what they’re going to get from reading an article isn’t the only way to do this, as Brian Clark shows us here, but it is a simple and effective method anyone can use. Are you beginning your articles with strong leads?

Remove qualifiers from your language

Would you feel that I carried authority and was trustworthy if my first paragraph read like the one below?

I would like to show you how you too might be able to write with authority and inspire trust by providing you with information and techniques you can hopefully apply to your writing. I believe that people often want reliable information they feel they can trust. In my opinion, a mostly trusting readership can be a platform from which you may launch anything you like, including ethical monetization efforts which have a good chance to succeed.

Of course I exaggerated for effect–but not by much! Wishy-washy language communicates to others that you are unsure of yourself. This creates an unpleasant dissonance in the mind of your reader, who wants to see you an expert, but you undermine this with your language. Your writing must sound confident and sure of itself in order to be authoritative and inspire trust.

Ignore feelings of inadequacy that spring up inside you as you edit your writing! I know this is common, and I used to experience it myself, but I do not any longer. That is your inner saboteur whispering to you. Tell it to shut up and take a hike. Show a little courage. Remember that readers want to see you as an expert. You need to meet them halfway and sound like one.

Command your reader

Yes, that’s right, I said command. When I told you to go back and reread the first paragraph above, did you do it? Have you noticed that the headline to this article and each sub-head is a command? I’m not being a bombastic blowhard. But I am telling you what to do, and that is exactly what you want. After all, what did you read this article for? To learn how to write with authority in a way that inspires trust. How are you going to do that if I don’t tell you? How could you trust me if this article isn’t a good example of its own precepts?

Never deceive, always keep your word

Trust is something that builds up in the minds of your readers over time, and it can be shattered with a single deception or broken promise. The perception of your authority is transformed into an ugly sense of betrayal in the minds of your readers. One of the great things about blogs is that they are like one giant sales brochure in the form of posts and comments. Over time, if you can prove that your word is good and that you can follow through, your readers will trust you. If your blog is for business marketing purposes, this is a most precious achievement. Are you doing anything on your blog that if your readers found out they would lose trust in you?

Authority challenge

Writing with authority is a conscious decision. So decide. You can begin to apply these techniques to that blog post you have in draft right now. If part of your problem is that you need more knowledge or skill, get it as fast as you can, because everything you write between now and then will be a waste of time.

Tell me about a post you wrote where you applied these techniques in the comments below. Let’s work together to provide more examples for everyone. I will freely make recommendations and point out good examples so that the whole group benefits.

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Comment by Eric Brantner
2008-05-06 12:04:30
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Good points. There is so much garbage floating around the internet that you have to convince your reader you know your stuff. There are tons of blogs out there that are obviously bluffing their way through it, but if you speak with authority, the readers will be able to tell the difference. good post.

Comment by Michael Martine
2008-05-06 12:43:04
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Thanks, Eric! Glad you enjoyed it. Speaking with authority but without real knowledge and experience to back it up is fatal to success. That’s why the first point I stressed is you should truly know your stuff before anything else.

 
 
Comment by Film Director
2008-05-06 13:12:40
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Really nice. I agree with eric, you know your stuff. I like this blog because of this. :!:
Good Post!

 
 
Comment by Cyndee Haydon Subscribed to comments via email
2008-05-06 16:15:50
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Michael - great point - I often have to rewrite a post to be more directive - and have done just that when we get to the bottom of a post and instead of saying…would you like to search for homes I now tend to say things like…”call me now to discuss…” or “Begin your home search now…” - thanks for the reminder!

Comment by Michael Martine
2008-05-06 21:21:40
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One of the great things about editing is that it’s an opportunity to strengthen our original message by removing wishy-washy and unnecessary words. I’m glad to see you doing that, and also adding in your pitch at the end. What you’re doing works well for you, Cyndee, and others should emulate it.

 
 
2008-05-06 18:28:34
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You have to tell your readers how it is… not how it ‘might’ be.

Great post!

Comment by Michael Martine
2008-05-06 21:22:23
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That’s a very succinct way to phrase it! Thank you for that.

 
 
Comment by Steven Snell
2008-05-06 19:05:47
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A trusting readership is a platform from which you may launch anything you like.

This is very true. I see it in practice constantly around blogs that I read.

Comment by Michael Martine
2008-05-06 21:24:24
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Steven, absolutely! The problem is that most people want to monetize far too early, before they’ve built up the audience numbers and trust that would make it work. They sell out before there’s anyone to even buy. You’ve got to play it smart and go for the long haul, like Brian Clark did.

 
 
Comment by Lid Subscribed to comments via email
2008-05-06 23:25:37
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Well said Michael! Thanks.

Interestingly, as new bloggers realize the importance of writing with authority, and begin doing so, they notice a neat side effect; search engine’s too like authoritative writing, and reward it.

 
Comment by PS3 Subscribed to comments via email
2008-05-07 02:41:34
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I have to agree Michael. Some of the most successful blogs no doubt started as a bit of a hobby for the poster using content they were passionate about…

….then all of a sudden they realise people really like and trust the blog and it’s time to monetise (not the other way around).

 
Comment by Guy Cohen
2008-05-07 21:41:22
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Right, writing in authority simply means that you know what you are talking about, you know what you are trying to convey to your readers. This blog is really worth reading for. :)

 
2008-05-08 21:10:05
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2008-05-09 07:50:06
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Comment by Ruslan
2008-05-10 05:35:43
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:wink: Right, writing in authority simply means that you know what you are talking about, you know what you are trying to convey to your readers. This blog is really worth reading for. :smile:

 
Comment by Alex Smile
2008-05-10 06:33:30
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That’s right.

And what I wanna say if you’re a SEO blogger and you are really working in SEO you should sometimes write some SEO “secrets” in your blog. In this way the readers will know that your blog is an important one and will be permanently here waiting for the next portion of the SEO data.

 
Comment by Owen
2008-05-10 09:03:22
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Great post, and I love the way you used the post itself as an example of what you were talking about.

Thanks for your insight

 
Comment by SEO dude
2008-05-12 06:52:57
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In fact lots of famous bloggers and marketeers said that building up trust with your client/reader is the first step towards success.

 
Comment by Lynn Terry
2008-05-12 07:05:02
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Excellent advice! I’m going to share this post with my readers at Self-Starters Weekly Tips. Thanks for linking to this on Twitter - which is beginning to replace my feed reader ;)

 
Comment by Viviane Subscribed to comments via email
2008-05-13 14:56:28
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Michael,

Thanks for your words of wisdom. It all makes a lot of sense, yet it is so easy to go off track in the heat of battle.

A few points really hit home with me and made me realize I had been a bit lax, particularly in the ‘command’ and ‘qualifier’ arenas.

I made a copy of your article to serve as a reminder when I am writing articles and posts - hope you don’t mind.

 
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